[DENIED]SAFD Application | William Lobster

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[DENIED]SAFD Application | William Lobster

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STATE OF SAN ANDREAS

FIRE DEPARTMENT

EMPLOYMENT APPLICATION



PART 1: IN-CHARACTER

A. Personal Information
  1. Name: William
  2. Surname: Lobster
  3. Age: 36
  4. Race: Australian
  5. Residence: Los santos,idlewood motels
  6. Height: 1.76
  7. Weight: 75
  8. Which divisional career are you willing to join?: Firefighter
  9. Passport: Yep
  10. Driving License: yep
B. Public Knowledge
  1. Education:
    Australia
  2. Past employment experiences (for example PD, FBI):
    PD
  3. What has motivated you to join the SAFD? Why do you want to join?
    idk,its good to save people and world around you. ;)
  4. Describe with your own words, what does it mean to be a Firefighter or alternatively, a paramedic?:
    Fire Fighter means Fire Fighter.i wanna Fight Fire and save people and wold.:)
PART II: OUT OF CHARACTER
  1. Real-life age: 16
  2. Country: Serbia
  3. Timezone: Europes.idk
  4. Discord ID :Zekan#3381
    Zekan#3381
  5. State all your previous names:
    first DOCKY_TTRIMP,Zekan_Popovich,William_Lobster
  6. State all the groups and factions you are currently part of:
    SAPD,SAFD gropus

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Re: Re: Recruitment [OPEN]

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PLEASE CHECK!CYA

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Re: Re: Recruitment [OPEN]

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ACKNOWLEDGE

STATE OF SAN ANDREAS

FIRE DEPARTMENT

APPLICATION STATUS UPDATE



William Lobster,

We wish to inform you that we acknowledged your application and interest in joining the San Andreas Fire Department. For the next couple of days, your application will undergo evaluation by the command and academy team personnel. Until further notice, remain patient, and in case of questions, you may call the Fire Department hotline anytime for instant answers at any time (( Contact one of the department members in-game )).

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Re: Re: Recruitment [OPEN]

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STATE OF SAN ANDREAS

FIRE DEPARTMENT

APPLICATION UPDATE STATUS



William Lobster,

We have found errors in your application, and therefore, set your application into pending status. You have 48 hours to correct the errors or your application will be denied. If you do correct the errors, you may create a new post in which you inform us that you have corrected the errors.

The faults spotted are as following:
* Application rule no.7 clearly states "* The applicant must add "SAFD Application | " in his Subject title. Example: "SAFD Application | Romet Winters" (without ")"
* Application rule no.5 states "* Applicants must mark a "+" into the boxes where required in the application. (DON'T ADD "X")" You have the wrong format in 1A: H,I,J.
* 1B: C and D are extremely dumb and childish writing "idk" and making many mistakes in wording of the sentence not to mention that you use emojis in a formal application and you're 16. Also they are really short and they need to be specified and elaborated.
* PART 2: C is it really that hard googling "Serbia timezone"? Also with the "idk" is really unprofessional that makes me deny you right now but I will give you the benefit of the doubt. Serbia's timezone is GMT +1.

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Re: [PENDING]Re: Recruitment [OPEN]

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STATE OF SAN ANDREAS

FIRE DEPARTMENT

APPLICATION UPDATE STATUS



William Lobster,

We regret to inform you that after a negative evaluation, we have decided to reject your request to enroll in the department. Your application was rejected based on the following reasons:

* Failed to correct the mistakes within 48 hours.

To fix the issue(s) that resulted in denying your application and to increase your chances for a future application, we suggest:

* Be more active on the forums and IG.

To re-apply, you need to wait at least two (2) week(s). You may apply again after the 3rd of May. Any submitted application before the stated period will be immediately denied.

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